haiku-usa
A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.
Monday, March 31, 2008
Thursday, March 27, 2008
Tuesday, March 25, 2008
Sunday, March 23, 2008
More for Easter
Easter
a spot of holy water
on my silk tie
* * *
Easter
I feel a twinge
in my genuflection
* * *
Easter Mass
I run into a friend
I thought was dead
* * *
"Come Holy Ghost"
as the church doors open
leaves in the wind*
*"Come Holy Ghost" is a traditional Catholic hymn, often sung at the end of Mass, as the doors are opening. This is not specifically an Easter ku, but I wrote it this morning, along with the others, and I hope it suggests spring.
Saturday, March 22, 2008
Wednesday, March 19, 2008
Saturday, March 15, 2008
Tuesday, March 11, 2008
surrogate, with alternative
surrogate:
the baby handed over,
her womb is hers again
("India Nurtures Business of Surrogate Motherhood," NY Times, 10 March 2008)
***
In this senryu as originally posted, the phrase "handed over" is from the original news story. Since posting it, I thought of an alternative that might say it a bit more powerfully. Or not.
surrogate:
the baby delivered,
her womb is hers again
My thought is that "delivered" refers to the birth itself and to the "handing over."
Saturday, March 08, 2008
Tuesday, March 04, 2008
trumpet
I wrote this a while ago. A recent comment from floots has reminded me of it.
late snow
the daffodil's trumpet
lowered
(Published at haiku du jour)