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Wednesday, March 19, 2008

apostate

the apostate—
cold wind heavy rain
and no one to blame

12 Comments:

Blogger polona said...

no one to blame is not necessarily bad :)

11:38 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

No, it's just that before his/her apostasy, there was someone to blame.

9:31 PM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

A guilty man --
even a bright sunshine
was his reason!

(It's time for Easter, now)

2:48 AM  
Anonymous gautami tripathy said...

There always is someone to blame!

:D

5:49 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Funny thing, I know a woman, a poet, whose conversion to Catholicism began when she realized that, although she didn't believe in God, she knew Someone was to blame for everything she found unsatisfactory in the universe. The apostate in my poem is just feeling a bit deprived.

7:45 AM  
Blogger haiku-shelf said...

big smile!...


and i like your story about this woman, Bill


Happy Easter, dear Polona, Tikkis, Gautami, Bill!

Angelika

10:31 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thank you, Angelika, and Happy Easter to you and yours.

6:15 PM  
Anonymous Ella Wagemakers said...

You're actually implying that an apostate is more (or less!) than human! Should I wish I was one? I enjoy your senryu -- they make me ponder, and not just think.

around the earth
the planets and stars ...
where are the strings?

:>) Ella
"Into every bowl of soup, a fly must fall." ... 'moi'

6:49 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Having someone/something to blame can be comforting, even if we have to invent him/her/it for the purpose.

7:54 PM  
Blogger A.Decker said...

Beautiful, silly, freedom. It used to rain "on me." Now, it just rains.

11:34 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Good thought, AD.

12:10 PM  
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6:23 AM  

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