haiku-usa: Another for WCW

Tuesday, February 19, 2008

daybreak

a rusted wheelbarrow

catches the sun

polona said...: unlike the previous one, i'm familiar with the red wheelbarrow
and even if i weren't, this is excellent!; 10:24 AM
josh said...: plum blossoms
somewhere a poet
raids the fridge; 10:36 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, polona.

Good one, Josh.; 2:59 PM
Masago said...: Has a nice spring feeling.; 4:12 PM
Crafty Green Poet said...: very vivid; 2:37 AM
floots said...: this is a great visual bill
wcw would be proud of you
cheers; 5:09 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, vaughn, Juliet, and floots.

Careful, floots. That kind of praise might go to my head.; 6:20 AM
Pat Paulk said...: I hope it filled it up!!; 5:53 AM
haiku-shelf said...: i like this one very much!; 1:20 PM
Bill said...: Pat: yep!

Thanks, Angelika; 9:25 PM
Billie Dee said...: Hi Bill,

This is Just to Say, I like your tribute to WCW -- and your wheelbarrow ku -- two of my favorite poems.; 3:39 PM
Bill said...: No ideas but in things, Billie.; 7:23 PM
jem said...: This is great. And very hopeful. I love the way even the oldest and rustiest gets a dose of sun.; 3:47 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, Jem. I appreciate your specifying the emotional effect of the poem. That note of hope was important to me.; 8:02 AM

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