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Thursday, February 08, 2007

solitudes

the old couple
silent together sharing
solitudes

8 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Nice layers here, Bill.

10:39 PM  
Blogger floots said...

love this
so true

12:29 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, aurora and floots. I hoped to convey a sense of how the two partners in such a relationship can be together and separate at the same time.

8:17 AM  
Blogger polona said...

i love this one.

10:55 AM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

well-balanced harmony!

5:46 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thank you, polona and tikkis.

9:55 AM  
Blogger Masago said...

Yes, I understand this well.

10:05 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Your comment pleases me very much, Vaughn.

9:24 AM  

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