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Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Monday, January 08, 2007

bubble

waking alone
a bubble floats
across the coffee cup

16 Comments:

Blogger gautami tripathy said...

It sure does. Sometimes it explodes.

BTW, I linke you to my blog.

12:22 PM  
Blogger USpace said...

..
LOL, great one!


absurd thought -
God of the Universe says
outlaw all poetry...
..

1:35 PM  
Blogger Masago said...

Well done...multi-leveled, as most of yours are.

6:18 PM  
Blogger Aurora said...

Ditto Vaughn. :)

8:07 PM  
Blogger mattm said...

good stuff

12:30 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

thanks, gautami. As I think I mentioned before, I'll be updating the links here around the end of the month.

uspace: naw, the God of the universe is on our side!

Thanks for that generous comment, Vaughn.

Ditto, aurora

Apreciated, mattm

6:26 AM  
Blogger Collin said...

Great stuff Bill, this is one of those I wish I'd written!

10:00 PM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Waiting to pop, or be drunk? Good to the last "p"!!

4:36 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

High praise, indeed, collin, especially when I think of those you have written. Much appreciated.

pat, is that slogan still around?

8:57 AM  
Blogger polona said...

my first thought: what the...
and then the moment of realisation :)
great one, bill!

10:51 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Personally, poloan, I like the ones that sneak up on me.

5:17 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Oops, I mean polona.

5:17 PM  
Anonymous USpace said...

Bill - You're right, of course God is on our side, that's why it's an absurd thought. Thanks for the inspiration.

absurd thought -
God of the Universe says
don't think absurdly


absurd thought -
God of the Universe is
NOT on our side

:)
.

10:27 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

uspace: here's a poem from my pre-haiku days

god
if
you're
not
on
my
side
get
off
my
back

; )

10:54 AM  
Anonymous USpace said...

Bill - Very cool, well said, a little re-arranging and you would have had your first senryu way back then.

God if you are
not on my side
- get off my back


:)
.

10:12 PM  
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6:59 AM  

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