haiku-usa: bubble

Monday, January 08, 2007

bubble

waking alone

a bubble floats

across the coffee cup

13 Comments:

gautami tripathy said...: It sure does. Sometimes it explodes.

BTW, I linke you to my blog.; 12:22 PM
Captain USpace said...: ..
LOL, great one!

absurd thought -
God of the Universe says
outlaw all poetry...
..; 1:35 PM
Masago said...: Well done...multi-leveled, as most of yours are.; 6:18 PM
Bill said...: thanks, gautami. As I think I mentioned before, I'll be updating the links here around the end of the month.

uspace: naw, the God of the universe is on our side!

Thanks for that generous comment, Vaughn.

Ditto, aurora

Apreciated, mattm; 6:26 AM
collin barber said...: Great stuff Bill, this is one of those I wish I'd written!; 10:00 PM
Pat Paulk said...: Waiting to pop, or be drunk? Good to the last "p"!!; 4:36 AM
Bill said...: High praise, indeed, collin, especially when I think of those you have written. Much appreciated.

pat, is that slogan still around?; 8:57 AM
polona said...: my first thought: what the...
and then the moment of realisation :)
great one, bill!; 10:51 AM
Bill said...: Personally, poloan, I like the ones that sneak up on me.; 5:17 PM
Bill said...: Oops, I mean polona.; 5:17 PM
Anonymous said...: Bill - You're right, of course God is on our side, that's why it's an absurd thought. Thanks for the inspiration.

absurd thought -
God of the Universe says
don't think absurdly

absurd thought -
God of the Universe is
NOT on our side

:)
.; 10:27 AM
Bill said...: uspace: here's a poem from my pre-haiku days

god
if
you're
not
on
my
side
get
off
my
back

; ); 10:54 AM
Anonymous said...: Bill - Very cool, well said, a little re-arranging and you would have had your first senryu way back then.

God if you are
not on my side
- get off my back

:)
.; 10:12 PM

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