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Thursday, December 14, 2006

light

a white sail
at the far shore
autumn light

9 Comments:

Blogger Aurora said...

Nicely done, Bill!

9:37 PM  
Blogger floots said...

wonderfully serene image bill
(and all the more welcome as it's gales an darkness here)
thank you

9:37 PM  
Blogger patpaulk said...

Ditto Floots, very peaceful. Low 70's and gorgeous here.

4:44 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks aurora, floots, and pat. Sort of a last look at summer as autumn, beautiful in its own way, takes over. And now it's winter.

One from the past:

I never saw it
until winter stripped the trees
the curve of the hill

8:47 AM  
Blogger Polona said...

both beautiful, bill... the posted one and the one in the comments.
a fine transition between seasons.

9:38 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thank you, polona.

8:26 PM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

Well-balanced, I specially like the word 'far' in the middle! It makes your haiku a little bit harrowing?

The sail is somewhere far away. Only the sail, where are we, far, or near? Also the last line is descending, but the last word is 'light'!

1:36 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

A very sensitive reading, tikkis. Thanks.

12:25 PM  
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