A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

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Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Friday, November 03, 2006

autumn afternoon

autumn afternoon
ripples on the lake move
faster than I do


Blogger Aurora said...

Ha! :)

Something about being slow and steady, though, that beats any ripples.

7:58 AM  
Blogger mikaelah said...

beautiful... allowing the ripples to be in the lead

12:55 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

i like the hint of aging in this :)

9:10 AM  
Blogger polona said...

ripples on the lake travel as far as the shore... but this haiku has no limits... love it!

1:27 PM  
Blogger Masago said...


10:42 PM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

old tree
waves it's branch!

4:11 AM  
Blogger floots said...

as they say - take it easy but take it
lovely laid-back take on the season
thanks bill

1:00 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Just got bck from a weekend trip. Good to hear from all of you, and thanks.

Glad you picked up the aging theme, Ruthanne. And at your age, too!

5:26 PM  
Blogger littlepurplecow said...

leaves begin to tumble
Thanksgiving weeks away
Santa's at the mall

Thrilled to find your blog. Senryu is a new fav of mine.

11:29 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Glad you dropped in, lpc

9:00 PM  
Blogger indonesianegriku said...

thank's for sharing info,..!
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7:04 AM  

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