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Monday, November 13, 2006

abandoned . . .

moonlight

on broken glass

polona said...: wonderful!; 11:51 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, aurora and polona. I wasn't sure it said enough.; 7:23 PM
Masago said...: A subtle word sketch...Interesting.; 8:29 PM
J. Andrew Lockhart said...: lonely and stark -- beautiful; 11:27 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, vaughn and andrew. As my response to aurora and polona suggests, I was afraid it might be too subtle, too stark. I'm glad it works for you.; 3:42 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, Melanie. I appreciate the care you take in articulating your response. And it's always good to hear from you.; 5:47 PM
baseball gods said...: Bill,

This one really grabbed me.

kami; 11:16 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, kami. Glad to hear it.; 2:33 PM
Gabi Greve said...: very impressive, Bill san !

Gabi
. Happy Haiku Gallery .

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Tikkis said...: Just some five words,
and so strong story!

What happened? No lights anymore,
just moonlight left. Why broken glass. Yeah. If I got some good idea in the middle of the night,
I'll phone you!; 10:26 AM
Bill said...: Thank you, gabi.

tikkis, I like to give you something to do.; 8:52 PM
Tikkis said...: Yeah, Bill, that's the idea of writing haikus!; 11:08 PM

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