haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Sunday, January 28, 2007

the raggedy man

shouts into a pay phone

out of order

Masago said...: Love it!; 6:39 PM
Pat Paulk said...: Takes more force to transmit over a dead line. Love it!!; 4:16 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, Vaughn, Rita, and pat. Rita, your response identifies precisely the effect I was aiming for.; 5:39 PM
polona said...: very good, bill!
yes, the image is both humourous and poignant.; 2:56 PM
gautami tripathy said...: I have seen this happening!; 1:38 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, paulana and gautami. Yes, gautami, it's not restricted to New York.; 6:47 AM
floots said...: ambiguity and humanity
nice one; 10:32 AM
Bill said...: Thank you, floots and Stephanie.; 12:59 PM
Anonymous said...: wow. there's a lot of images in this one! i like it a lot; 2:55 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, Ruth Anne. Good tohear from you.; 5:35 PM