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Wednesday, March 07, 2012

sun in the city

sun in the city
one of those shadows
is mine

Left as a comment, in a slightly different version, at Dalloway's blog

8 Comments:

Blogger polona said...

wonderfully multilayered

9:17 AM  
Blogger Bouwe Brouwer said...

Very good!

11:29 AM  
Blogger Magyar said...

'Tis following you!

Lively, as always Bill. _m

5:04 PM  
Blogger Frank... said...

It's good to know that we are all individuals and our shadow is unique to us. Nice one, Bill...

10:59 AM  
Blogger Monika said...

Great ! I like it.

soleil dans la city
une de ces ombres
est la mienne

11:08 AM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

like it Bill
john

2:53 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks for the comments, And, Monika, for that excellent translation.

12:26 PM  
Blogger Rita Odeh said...

A memorable ku, Bill. It reminded me of the zen principle: attention, acceptence and responsibility. It is great to accept our shadow the same as we accept our sun. Enjoyed it.

1:34 AM  

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