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Tuesday, February 14, 2012

Valentine's Day

Valentine's Day
she tells him how much
he loves her


Blogger Monika said...

Merveilleux ! J'adore !
C'est drĂ´le et tendre...

elle lui dit combien
il l'aime

8:08 AM  
Blogger Magyar said...

Yup! She did!
Lovit. _m

8:33 AM  
Blogger Karol Rosiak said...

A nice senryu, Bill :)


8:34 AM  
Anonymous Rita Odeh said...

Using "tells" instead of "asks", is an amazing ambush for the reader. I am glad that I am here, again.

9:12 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Monika. Another delightful translation.

Thanks, M and Karol.

So am I, Rita, so am I! Wonderful to hear from you.

6:14 PM  
Blogger jem said...

That twist that makes the reader do a double take - that spins three lines into an entire story. Lovely!

4:29 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Jem. I like your reading.

11:57 AM  

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