haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Tuesday, February 14, 2012

she tells him how much

he loves her

Monika said...: Merveilleux ! J'adore !
C'est drôle et tendre...

Saint-Valentin
elle lui dit combien
il l'aime; 8:08 AM
Magyar said...: Yup! She did!
Lovit. _m; 8:33 AM
Karol Rosiak said...: A nice senryu, Bill :)

K.; 8:34 AM
Rita Odeh said...: Using "tells" instead of "asks", is an amazing ambush for the reader. I am glad that I am here, again.; 9:12 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, Monika. Another delightful translation.

Thanks, M and Karol.

So am I, Rita, so am I! Wonderful to hear from you.; 6:14 PM
jem said...: That twist that makes the reader do a double take - that spins three lines into an entire story. Lovely!; 4:29 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, Jem. I like your reading.; 11:57 AM