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Tuesday, January 17, 2012

deep night

deep night
snow falling through
the silence

This is a revised version of one I recently posted as a comment at Warren's blog.


Blogger Adelaide said...

Lovely, Bill.

I can't post on Warren's blog, not even to tell him I can't. I just get a flashing white page.


7:53 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

thanks, adelaide.

try using the link I provide. It works for me.

7:59 AM  
Blogger Frank... said...

Nice one, Bill...

8:35 AM  
Blogger Sic Luceat 2 said...

I like your poems

as an image that speaks

friendly Sic

10:00 AM  
Blogger Magyar said...

The -deep-,
the -snow-,
the-silence-... .
Picture perfect, Bill. _m

8:34 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

nice one Bill; havent been able to post at Warren's blog in a while; now i know the problem stems not from my computer

much love...

9:23 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

thanks, all.
good to meet you, Sic.

Gillena, I've left a message at warren's blog regarding the problem you mention. You can apparently access it via the link I provide; I've had no trouble.

9:36 AM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

Warrens blog and that text is here.

By the way; we have presidential elections going on here in Finland. - Still 30% doesn't know to whom they'll give their votes.

In Finland the president is quite "silent"; not allowed to say, or do nearly anything... ;-(

We changed our constitution after Mr Kekkonen had too much to say and do :-) And I think we are in a swamp now? Hss, don't reveal me to the Finnish Secret Police.

deep silence -
wintry snows
not allowed to vote

10:39 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

well, I'm glad to know that the US isn't the only country mired in political insanity.

6:48 PM  
Blogger Warren said...

Gorgeous poem, Bill - I could use other descriptors but the quiteness and calm imparted in your poem makes it a gorgeous haiku to me,

P.S. - I think I got the problem of posting on my blog repaired. Had to change settings after I changed my template.

Again - love this haiku.


8:03 PM  

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