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Sunday, February 26, 2012

going out

going out to see
the daffodil shoots
I dress warmly

Just posted as a comment at Annie Juhl's Water Dragon blog

http://anniejuhl.blogspot.com

7 Comments:

Blogger Magyar said...

... and the waxy crocuses (crocusi?)
__Nice, and soon the warmer green, Bill. _m

12:30 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Yes, I can see you walking with a hopeful smile.. thanks Bill.. I think I am getting it.. Bill, if you could visit here and give a feedback in terms of pure Haiku..then I will be more aware of the difference and shall try..

http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2012/02/footfalls-of-spring.html

I will wait..thanks!!

9:26 PM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

nice one Bill
john

12:19 AM  
Blogger Danièle Duteil said...

Malgré la fraîcheur ambiante, un spectacle qui réchauffe !

2:49 AM  
Blogger Monika said...

J'aime !

sortant pour voir
les jonquilles pointer
je emmitoufle

6:55 AM  
Blogger Frank... said...

Here we had a bit of a false spring earlier this year. Now it feels as though spring is now on its way. Nice contrast of images, Bill...

10:49 AM  
Blogger Monika said...

P.S.
Please, correct my error in my translation, Bill :

sortant pour voir
les jonquilles pointer
je m'emmitoufle

8:24 AM  

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