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Wednesday, March 14, 2012

out

out early . . .
I exchange greetings
with a violet

I left a slightly different version of this as a comment at Rita Odeh's blog.

15 Comments:

Blogger Frank... said...

A good early morning greeting. Nice one, Bill...

12:22 PM  
Blogger polona said...

out early...
scolded by a couple
of great tits

(the birds, that is... and it's a true story)

1:00 PM  
Blogger Iris said...

both versions are beautiful :)

2:10 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Indeed it was. Thanks, Frank.

Birds, eh? I'll take your word for it, Polona. Thanks for the visit.

Thank you, Iris.

2:42 PM  
Blogger Adelaide said...

Nice one, Bill.

Adelaide

5:52 PM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

how sweet!

12:30 AM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

nice one Bill
john

1:28 AM  
Blogger Monika said...

sorti de bonne heure
j'├ęchange des salutations
avec une violette

Lucky you are, Bill ! Violets, already ? But even here, le snow is melting away...

6:21 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Adelaide, Juliet, and John.

Yes, Monika, a few here and there. We've been having a stretch of unseasonable weather. Of course, the entire winter has been unseasonable. Lovely translation.

7:30 AM  
Blogger Magyar said...

... and violet nods in salutation.

Well shown, Bill. _m

9:03 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thank you, M

6:52 PM  
Blogger Annie Juhl said...

Beautiful ;-)

12:30 AM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

late evening -
melting snow
saying good night

4:06 AM  
Blogger Rita Odeh said...

The violet says: Bravo, Bill. Enjoyed it.

6:11 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Annie, tikkis, and Rita, much appreciated.

8:58 AM  

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