haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Saturday, March 10, 2012

my neighbor's

ancient cat . . .

I blink first

A slightly different version of this was left as a comment at Juliet's blog.

Karol Rosiak said...: ...Ha!
Good one, Bill.

K.; 12:54 PM
John McDonald said...: excellent Bill
john; 12:07 AM
Crafty Green Poet said...: This is brilliant and was such an appropriate comment on the photo of Dexter the farm cat on my blog.; 6:54 AM
Iris said...: you make me smile :) Bill; 1:11 PM
Monika said...: oh, me too I love it ! (Being such a cat lover...)

(But, once again, impossible to translate if we want to keep the order of the three lines.); 11:09 AM
Magyar said...: Smiles, Bill!
Lovit! _m

the cat blinks
paws rubbed across its muzzle
spider web; 1:51 PM
Bill said...: Thanks for those comments. Competing with a cat is a mug's game.; 8:21 AM