path
mountain path
as far as I can follow
the butterfly
[First published in Notes from the Gean]
posted by Bill | 7:54 AM
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12 Comments:
The butterfly knows the way...
Nice, Bill. _m
well, I see you have been practicing ..grins.. I am just checking up on you kiddo!
Just like a woman some things are just worth following. There are reasons as to why I hold a door open. . .
Intriguing.
I would follow him, too! Lovely, Bill!
Happy walking.
Spring is around the corner.
lovely image and a nice glimpse of spring
as always .... luverly ...
your commentors add so many layers to my reading ...
i am doing a little trial of FFFs .. in which you are featuring ...
http://ginaseye.blogspot.com/2010/01/fabulous-friday-favourites2.html
i hope you dont mind ... >>> Gina
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another goody Bill
john
Super haiku Bill...
this is great...
following butterflies is the path to madness though...
sorry meant to actually comment on the poem ...
mountain path
as far as I can follow
the butterfly
i was drawn back to it in rereading today ...
i love the pivot (you may remember its one of my favourite techniques) ... i particularly like inversions which happens between both lines 1 and 3 utilising the pivot ...
and the moment itself - is fabulous ... metaphors do spring to mind but thats another thought entirely ...
>>> Gina
Thanks, everyone, for those generous comments.
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