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Sunday, December 27, 2009

after the rain

that followed the snow–

bright moon!

Devika Jyothi said...: Good one, Bill...and the others too :)

was not around, Hope you had a great Chrsitmas :)

wishes,
devika; 1:29 AM
Dianne said...: Very good, I like this one, of course the moon in a haiku is always perfect.; 9:00 AM
Tikkis said...: Ah, the Snow-moon!

snow-moon
brightened herself
in a wintry rainshower

;-); 12:40 PM
Magyar said...: ...and in the sun, the moss.

Fine one Bill! _m; 6:27 PM
Monika said...: Yes, Bill - a very nice one - very efficient, in its simplicity !; 8:38 PM
Gillena Cox said...: we had some Christmas season rain today here in TT

much love
gillena; 10:00 PM
John McDonald said...: yes I enjoyed
john; 1:00 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, all. Much appreciated.; 6:29 AM
Gina ... http://ginaseye.blogspot.com/ said...: i love the structure ... a new way ... you show a new way again ..

after the rain
that followed the snow–
bright moon!

i love the cadence of the phrase and 'bright' is important considering the preceding grey ..

add to it the bright of the white of snow and i am getting a bright moon and a bright shadow of the moon on the snow ...

really really luverly stuff Bill ... so nicely done ! ... (so nice also to see a pic of you finally !) >>> Gina; 2:06 AM
Anonymous said...: moon and moon and moon--my last poem, "Becoming the Moon." Lovely, Bill.; 8:40 AM

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