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Saturday, December 12, 2009

voices

autumn afternoon
children's voices wake me
from a daydream

This one is slightly out of season, and the next few posts will be as well. They were written a while ago, and they have recently been published in Notes from the Gean.

12 Comments:

Blogger Devika said...

Oh, a whole relaxed and playful atmos -- nice, Bill :)

wishes,
devika

8:06 PM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

evocative Bill
john

1:25 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Devika and John. The children are presumably coming home from school; they've been at work while the grownup was daydreaming. It certainly is a joyous sound to wake up to.

11:19 AM  
Blogger Kristin Riggs said...

Lovely in ANY season, Bill. :)

10:31 PM  
Anonymous Monika said...

Yes, I agree with Kristin : lovely!

11:46 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Kristin and Monika. there was something about that moment.

12:32 PM  
Blogger Magyar said...

Young laughs shatter my daydream of when I was... .

How true, Bill! _m

3:42 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Doug.

5:30 PM  
Blogger Adelaide said...

I can just feel the warm autumn sun and could easily drift off.

Adelaide

7:24 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thank you, Adelaide.

3:55 PM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

I just wonder what meaning the autumn is having here ...


Summery days
will return --
next year?

1:23 AM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

Ps 2: actually you said it,
autumn = children at school again...

I got another idea:

autumn --
all the long afternoons
by ourselves!

1:26 AM  

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