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Sunday, December 20, 2009

morning after

into the stillness
of this morning after snow
smoke from a chimney

14 Comments:

Blogger Devika said...

Good set, Bill :)

i liked this the most and then the 'weight of showel' :)

wishes,
devika

8:58 AM  
Anonymous Monika said...

And this one might even be the best of the three...

12:29 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thank you, Devika.

9:14 PM  
Blogger Dianne said...

Very rich, layers and a story, and painting an image.
love it.

11:29 PM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

lovely snow sequence Bill
john

1:17 AM  
Blogger bandit said...

Hope its not too cold; it can spoil the surprise and beauty of such a snow-though you could dress in multiple layers as you load 7 or 8 hundred pounds of sand in the back of your pickup, a twelve-pack on the seat next to you, a tow-chain on the floorboard and your best gal ridin' shotgun, ready to pull out the less fortunate stuck in the drifts, not a cop in sight...you're in your own little snow world, hee-hee, a real snow bandit!
Yeah, we're a bit simple here.
Have a ball, Bill, and Merry Christmas!

9:43 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Monika, Dianne, and John, my thanks.

Bandit, you do know how to party! Merry Christmas.

And blessings to all.

2:25 PM  
Anonymous Nancy said...

Fantastic little gem, this one.

3:24 PM  
Blogger Masago said...

Good one.

6:44 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Nancy and Vaughn.

7:02 PM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

Beautiful picture!

I wrote a global-warming-senruy, but my wife said me not to send it, but next year perhaps.
.-)

12:56 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Well, tikkis, you're closer to Copenhagen than I am.

8:16 PM  
OpenID simplydanielle.com said...

yes, i like this calmness the feeling of surging on even though it's hard nice. Danielle Love

3:42 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Danielle.

7:04 AM  

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