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Sunday, February 07, 2010

Groundhog

Groundhog Day
the toddler points
at her shadow

[I posted this one at tikkis's and kristin's blogs in response to poems of theirs.]

11 Comments:

Anonymous Monika said...

Very good ! Made me smile, as many of your haiku, Bill.

5:50 AM  
Blogger Art Mama said...

Thanks for your wonderful blog, and haiku.

9:31 AM  
Blogger julesinspacedancing said...

such a pretty image - a fragment in a heart beat.
Thank you - I love it!

12:21 PM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

very sweet

12:13 AM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

yes good one Bill
john

1:12 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Monika, Juliet, and John.

And Art Mama and Julia, thank you, and welcome to my blog.

8:26 AM  
Blogger Magyar said...

Sharp one, Bill!_m

5:43 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Doug.

7:28 AM  
Blogger Anonymous Poet said...

Have we replaced the groundhog with a child, now?

What happens with the child grows up, then?

(Excellent poem, BTW. Made me chuckle).

7:03 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

When the child grows up, anon, I'm afraid she'll worry about the future, like the rest of us.

3:41 PM  
Blogger T.Migratorius said...

Good one!

8:07 PM  

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