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Sunday, November 16, 2008

chill

morning chill
the brook flowing
through my shadow
[First published in moonset]

12 Comments:

Anonymous Gina said...

so nicely done Bill ... showing me you are taking a walk - no telling. very cleverly solved by 'morning chill', as opposed to 'morning walk/stroll'

good stuff >>> Gina

9:22 PM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

delightful bill
john

1:06 AM  
Blogger Devika said...

Very nice imagery...
I love walking in morning chill :-)

wishes!
devika

1:35 AM  
Blogger jem said...

Water and shadow - two of my favourite things! Both work together to reinforce the sense of chill from the first line. Well done.

2:53 AM  
Blogger Magyar said...

Ooo... like this Bill. But please excuse me for that bit of humor I see here: "Is it necessary at some point to 'wring-out' your shadow"?
_m

5:21 AM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

I always see shadows as eerie alter egos. Love it!

5:55 AM  
Anonymous gautami tripathy said...

I like to observe shadows!

6:15 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

gin, john, devika, jem, magyar, pat and gautami, your comments are deeply appreciated. Yes, magyar, a soggy shadow can really slow you down.

6:34 AM  
Blogger Masago said...

Ah...

6:25 PM  
Blogger polona said...

brrr, i can feel the chill...

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