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Monday, October 27, 2008

barefoot

barefoot
the earth
pushes back
[First published in Acorn]

17 Comments:

Blogger Art and Poetry said...

Nice feeling to this one!

2:09 AM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

can feel it bill
john

4:24 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Nick and John. This is one I posted a few months back, but I've posted it a second time to celebrate its publication.

3:44 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

barefoot in the sand
the heat
on a sunny day


much love
gillena

6:53 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thank you, gillena.

7:51 AM  
Blogger Magyar said...

_There is something "connective" about this... "feeling" the earth.
_m

8:42 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Well said, magyar

1:18 PM  
Blogger polona said...

do i remember this one?
still, it's excellent
(ah, i see now you said it had been posted before)

3:19 PM  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I see the "feel"

9:32 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks for the visit, polona and andrew. And, polona, thanks for remembering.

1:52 PM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

;-) continuing Gillena's:

barefoot in the snow --
a man visited the lady
next door


(This is a true story, but he was not me!)

12:37 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Hmmm. What an interesting neighborhood, Tikkis.

9:06 PM  
Blogger jem said...

So few words, but so strong. A feeling of belonging, of being grounded.

4:52 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

That's it, exactly, jem. As I said when I first posted this, walking barefoot can be pretty intense for a city boy like me.

7:47 AM  
Blogger Ella Wagemakers said...

I can feel the throb of both hearts, Bill.

autumn leaves ...
will my hair turn black
again in spring?

But of course your ku was about feet.

barefoot
I still prefer sand
beneath my feet

Ella

2:05 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

I like those, ella, especially the autumn one.

5:58 PM  
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