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Tuesday, October 14, 2008

fog

fog lifting
the tree
where it is
(First published in Frog Pond)

14 Comments:

Blogger Gillena Cox said...

we sometimes lose the mountains, in the mist from my front porch view


much love
gillena

6:17 AM  
Blogger Masago said...

Wonderful.

5:58 PM  
Blogger Magyar said...

_A layer close to the ground, and on that fog this statue floats. Good One, Bill. _m

6:22 PM  
Anonymous YogaforCynics said...

Oh wow...fascinating and evocative play on "fog lifting"...bringing to mind, in a strange way the tree I looked at earlier today, so large and, the bank around it having eroded, holding on so tight to a single large rock....

6:33 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, gillena, Vaughn, magyar, and Doctor Jay. Fog can do weird and wonderful things.

7:26 PM  
Blogger jem said...

Oh, nice one. So few words but such clarity. The things that shift and those that don't, the hidden and the shown. Lots of good mist writing about at the moment!

7:07 AM  
Anonymous gautami tripathy said...

I like the imagery!

8:05 AM  
Anonymous kouji haiku said...

wow. :O

10:11 AM  
Blogger polona said...

loveit, just love it

12:08 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Jem, gautami, kouji, polona, my deepest thanks.

9:15 PM  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

very nice, Bill!

9:41 PM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

also floating world economics ?-)

~~

5:03 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Andrew.

Good point, tikkis. A layer that's been added since I wrote this.

6:49 AM  
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