haiku-usa: fog

Tuesday, October 14, 2008

fog lifting

the tree

where it is

(First published in Frog Pond)

Gillena Cox said...: we sometimes lose the mountains, in the mist from my front porch view

much love
gillena; 6:17 AM
Masago said...: Wonderful.; 5:58 PM
Magyar said...: _A layer close to the ground, and on that fog this statue floats. Good One, Bill. _m; 6:22 PM
Anonymous said...: Oh wow...fascinating and evocative play on "fog lifting"...bringing to mind, in a strange way the tree I looked at earlier today, so large and, the bank around it having eroded, holding on so tight to a single large rock....; 6:33 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, gillena, Vaughn, magyar, and Doctor Jay. Fog can do weird and wonderful things.; 7:26 PM
jem said...: Oh, nice one. So few words but such clarity. The things that shift and those that don't, the hidden and the shown. Lots of good mist writing about at the moment!; 7:07 AM
Anonymous said...: I like the imagery!; 8:05 AM
Anonymous said...: wow. :O; 10:11 AM
polona said...: loveit, just love it; 12:08 PM
Bill said...: Jem, gautami, kouji, polona, my deepest thanks.; 9:15 PM
J. Andrew Lockhart said...: very nice, Bill!; 9:41 PM
Tikkis said...: also floating world economics ?-)

~~; 5:03 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, Andrew.

Good point, tikkis. A layer that's been added since I wrote this.; 6:49 AM

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