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Tuesday, August 26, 2008


art tour
trying to see
what they're told
(First published in Simply Haiku)


Blogger Art and Poetry said...

It's very clever I had to think about it, well done!

10:21 AM  
Blogger polona said...

made me smile, then made me think... which means it's very very good

12:40 PM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

oh yes, so true...

1:43 PM  
Blogger josh said...

I think I would prefer it, and, perhaps, identify more strongly with the poem/poet if you'd written "we're". Did you consider that?

Congrats on publication in SH...it's an outstanding journal.

2:04 PM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

After numerous (I won't tell how many)readings I got it! I often wonder if the artist painted what they interpret.

3:27 PM  
Blogger Magyar said...

The charm of haiku: You see what you see as you read; you, are your 'tour guide' through this art.

5:06 PM  
Blogger Masago said...

Right! Good one.

6:18 PM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

true bill

12:51 AM  
Blogger jem said...

Good one. I prefer all art to be a joint interpretation between the creator and the audience. Each has something to bring to the moment.

3:20 AM  
Blogger kouji said...

brilliant haiku. :)

10:18 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks for the visits, comments, suggestions.

1:21 PM  
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6:11 AM  

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