haiku-usa: summer morning

Friday, July 18, 2008

my neighbor's boat

nudges the dock

(Second place, Sketchbook kukai, June 2008; assigned kigo: "summer morning")

Anonymous said...: summer morning/ my neighbour's boat/ nudges the dock ..... lovely ... i am musing on the meaning behind 'neighbour' and what is going on in his boat compared to yours on a lovely quiet calm summer morning on the water ... i hope you and yours are well >>> Gina; 5:27 PM
Masago said...: Very nice.; 7:07 PM
jem said...: Beautiful. This reminds me of holidays to small harbour towns. Water and boats combine to make the most relaxing sounds. That knocking of hulls and that ting of sailing boats ropes on masts. Wow. You've conjured such impressions for me from this.; 4:44 AM
haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert) said...: nice!!; 5:48 AM
polona said...: love it... there's a lot in these few words; 3:08 PM
Bill said...: Thanks for the comments, my friends. I'm still in re-entry mode.; 10:38 AM
Tikkis said...: I liked this quite a lot!

Do you mind:

Bailing water out
of the bottom of a boat --
fisherman's morning; 12:12 PM
Bill said...: Don't mind at all, my friend. Thanks.; 6:52 AM
x said...: Lovely. :) Evokes such a lazy, peaceful, water ripple feeling.; 8:10 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, newbie.; 7:15 AM

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