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Friday, June 27, 2008

sand

white sand
a child asks why
I'm wearing shoes
(Shiki Kukai, June 2008)

16 Comments:

Blogger haiku-shelf said...

and why did you?...

with a smile,
Angelika


p.s.: a good haiku!

children are near to the nature, are open...we, the adults, know more, have more experiences with this and that...but at the same time we lost so much...

11:44 AM  
Blogger Masago said...

! :-)

5:24 PM  
Anonymous gina said...

gorgeous ...



GINA

1:35 AM  
Blogger polona said...

why indeed... where on the way do we lose this childhood spirit...

2:24 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Angelika, Vaughn, Gian, Polona, I appreciate those responses.
Maybe that was my inner child talking.

9:20 PM  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

the child would ask me the same. :)

9:29 PM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

love it
john

12:42 AM  
Blogger Ričardas said...

Very good question :) So, what is the answer?

2:55 AM  
Blogger jem said...

Theres so much to think of about this one. Mostly I'm falling into the childs mind, wondering what they were wondering.

7:07 AM  
Blogger Inside our hands, outside our hearts said...

This one is perfect Bill. I can see the images clearly. I love it when that happens.

T

9:05 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Andrew, John, Ricardas, Jem, and Tara, thanks for the visit and the comments.

You can be sure I didn't have them on for long.

2:21 PM  
Blogger Magyar said...

A question oft' answered with a question. Yes_! "Why am I wearing shoes?"

5:26 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Right on, magyar.

7:28 AM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

A good story;
first your interesting haiku,
and after that this conversation.

If there is an answer,
probably someone
made a question.

(But not necessarily?)

11:34 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

tikkis, I think I have sand in my shoes.

7:04 PM  
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