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Saturday, May 17, 2008

rushing the season?

barefoot
the earth
pushes back

8 Comments:

Blogger Masago said...

...pushing hard. Nice one.

9:45 PM  
Blogger polona said...

i can feel it :)

9:53 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Vaughn and polona. For a city boy, the sensation of walking barefoot anywhere but around the house or at the beach is pretty intense.

9:59 AM  
Blogger haiku-shelf said...

i like the feeling!

a good summer-haiku!

6:36 AM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Barefoot is the shoe wear of the season here. With as many soles and heels constantly stepping on Mother Earth's back, pushing back's a gentle response. Excellent piece!!

5:49 AM  
Anonymous GINA said...

barefoot
the earth
pushes back

love it too ... had to smile that the titles sometimes add a little more - as in this one ....

and i didnt know where else to tell you this (have a look and see if comments can be placed on your site as a whole without attaching to a poem) ...

i wanted to say ... i love your blogsite ... its perfectly haiku/senryu with a wonderful bunch of links to some people i know (and love) and others i am yet to discover ...

you have a great sense of humour too ! ...

i am in awe of when you wrote your first haiku! . wow .... i hope this means when i get there i too will write great poetry ! ::: hugs ::: >>> Gina

8:03 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

sumer is icumen in, Angelika.

Pat, glad to know this works for the barefoot community.

Gina, you're one of my favorite people. God bless.

9:43 PM  
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