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Tuesday, April 22, 2008

on the beach

on the beach
by the ancient city
sandcastle ruins


Blogger Tikkis said...

An archaeologist needed?

12:37 PM  
Blogger Magyar said...

I like the crumbled dream simile, Bill!

each grain knows
it is this sandcastle
the tide rises

4:57 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Well, tikkis, our cities are the ancient cities of the future, if there is a future. Maybe we'll be nothing but sandcastle ruins before you know it.

Thanks for the comment and ku, m.

10:13 PM  
Blogger polona said...

oh, i love this one... a profound observation.

9:34 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thank you, polona. A memory of our trip to Sicily.

6:29 AM  
Blogger Ričardas said...

on the long run we all live in sand castles. right image.

11:19 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Right on, ri?ardas.

4:00 PM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

nice juxtaposition

1:42 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Juliet.

4:02 PM  
Blogger indonesianegriku said...

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6:19 AM  

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