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Monday, April 07, 2008

shooting star

shooting star
the things I do
for attention
(Editor's Choice, Sketchbook, March 2008)


Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

that really made me smile!

12:26 PM  
Blogger Magyar said...

Do it again_!
Do it again_!

5:41 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Juliet and magyar, I'm glad I got your attention.

7:18 PM  
Blogger floots said...

mine too
brought the child back to me
(not that he's ever far away) :)
thanks bill

11:53 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

floots, you're a great playmate.

7:05 AM  
Anonymous gautami tripathy said...

I too feel like a child!


9:10 AM  
Blogger polona said...

ha! you certainly won my attention - in the best possible way

12:13 PM  
Blogger jem said...

I like this one a lot. It made me smile initially and then stop and think a bit about attention seeking in both good and bad ways. Great thought provoking haiku!

3:33 AM  
Blogger Ričardas said...

you've certainly succeeded this time, Bill.

12:13 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

gautami, polona, jem, and
ri?ardas, much appreciated.

1:31 PM  
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6:21 AM  

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