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Thursday, May 08, 2008

dusk

dusk
the brook becomes
its sound
(Published in World Haiku Review)

14 Comments:

Blogger John McDonald said...

wonderful transformation
john

12:44 AM  
Blogger jem said...

Oh, good one. The way the priority of our senses has to shift as time and light changes our world.

3:17 AM  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

visual turns to audio - I like it!

8:58 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

John, jem, andrew, my thanks.

3:29 PM  
Anonymous ed said...

bill,
thanks for the kind words
on "prairie sunset."
ed


office cubicle
the fly between
the windowpanes

4:38 PM  
Blogger Gina said...

gorgeous poetry Bill ... all of them ... just catching up with yours again .. and congratulations on the publications ! >>> Gina

5:53 PM  
Blogger Masago said...

Very good.

6:12 PM  
Blogger polona said...

ah yes... perfect observaion... the same thing becomes different when other senses take over...

11:09 AM  
Blogger haiku-shelf said...

an impressive haiku!

3:05 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

My pleasure, Ed. I like your cubicle.

Gina, Vaughn, polona, Angelika, thank you.

5:08 PM  
Blogger Ričardas said...

I love sound of it!

9:00 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Ricardas.

11:37 AM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

beautiful

12:21 AM  
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