haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Name: Bill

Location: New York, New York

A month before my 72nd birthday, I wrote my first haiku.

Thursday, May 08, 2008

the brook becomes

its sound

(Published in World Haiku Review)

John McDonald said...: wonderful transformation
john; 12:44 AM
jem said...: Oh, good one. The way the priority of our senses has to shift as time and light changes our world.; 3:17 AM
J. Andrew Lockhart said...: visual turns to audio - I like it!; 8:58 AM
Bill said...: John, jem, andrew, my thanks.; 3:29 PM
ed said...: bill,
thanks for the kind words
on "prairie sunset."
ed

office cubicle
the fly between
the windowpanes; 4:38 PM
Gina said...: gorgeous poetry Bill ... all of them ... just catching up with yours again .. and congratulations on the publications ! >>> Gina; 5:53 PM
Masago said...: Very good.; 6:12 PM
polona said...: ah yes... perfect observaion... the same thing becomes different when other senses take over...; 11:09 AM
haiku-shelf said...: an impressive haiku!; 3:05 PM
Bill said...: My pleasure, Ed. I like your cubicle.

Gina, Vaughn, polona, Angelika, thank you.; 5:08 PM
Ričardas said...: I love sound of it!; 9:00 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, Ricardas.; 11:37 AM
Crafty Green Poet said...: beautiful; 12:21 AM