haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Wednesday, April 30, 2008

starry night the darkness between fireflies

(Published in Acorn #20)

jem said...: This works so well on one line. It allows me to move between the words as if they were the fireflies/stars.; 6:37 AM
polona said...: makes me wish i was there to see this... wonderful; 10:43 AM
Bill said...: Thanks for that reading, Jem. I'm delighted it worked for you.

Polona, I wish you were here, too.; 2:47 PM
Crafty Green Poet said...: so beautiful...; 1:41 AM
Tikkis said...: A night bird
glanced at a star,
at a firefly; 10:31 AM
Bill said...: Thank you, Juliet and Tikkis.; 4:04 PM
John McDonald said...: lovely stuff since I been gone great bill
john; 12:22 AM
Bill said...: Thank you, John. Good to have you back.; 10:07 AM