haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Name: Bill

Location: New York, New York

A month before my 72nd birthday, I wrote my first haiku.

Wednesday, April 30, 2008

starry night the darkness between fireflies

(Published in Acorn #20)

jem said...: This works so well on one line. It allows me to move between the words as if they were the fireflies/stars.; 6:37 AM
polona said...: makes me wish i was there to see this... wonderful; 10:43 AM
Bill said...: Thanks for that reading, Jem. I'm delighted it worked for you.

Polona, I wish you were here, too.; 2:47 PM
Crafty Green Poet said...: so beautiful...; 1:41 AM
Tikkis said...: A night bird
glanced at a star,
at a firefly; 10:31 AM
Bill said...: Thank you, Juliet and Tikkis.; 4:04 PM
John McDonald said...: lovely stuff since I been gone great bill
john; 12:22 AM
Bill said...: Thank you, John. Good to have you back.; 10:07 AM