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Wednesday, April 30, 2008

starry

starry night the darkness between fireflies
(Published in Acorn #20)

9 Comments:

Blogger jem said...

This works so well on one line. It allows me to move between the words as if they were the fireflies/stars.

6:37 AM  
Blogger polona said...

makes me wish i was there to see this... wonderful

10:43 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks for that reading, Jem. I'm delighted it worked for you.

Polona, I wish you were here, too.

2:47 PM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

so beautiful...

1:41 AM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

A night bird
glanced at a star,
at a firefly

10:31 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thank you, Juliet and Tikkis.

4:04 PM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

lovely stuff since I been gone great bill
john

12:22 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thank you, John. Good to have you back.

10:07 AM  
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6:19 AM  

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