haiku-usa: corridor

Tuesday, November 04, 2008

This is a slightly revised version of a poem I wrote in response to a posting at devika's blog:
http://devika-jyothi.blogspot.com

long corridor

one step ahead

of my echoes

polona said...: love the echoes of this one :); 10:24 AM
Masago said...: Nice; 5:07 PM
Devika Jyothi said...: :-)

thanks and regards,
devika; 5:46 PM
John McDonald said...: great one bill
john; 12:54 AM
Anonymous said...: Go one...

then the long becomes short...; 8:33 AM
Gillena Cox said...: i could hear the sounds bouncing back

much love
gillena; 8:35 AM
Bill said...: Special thanks to devika, for inspiring this.

gautami, I take it you mean "go on." Thanks for the thoughtful comment.

And, gillena, for your sensuous one.

And thanks, Vaughn and John, for your encouraging responses.; 10:49 AM
J. Andrew Lockhart said...: I really like L2-3!; 9:07 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, Andrew.; 9:46 PM
Anonymous said...: lovely. :); 10:21 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, kouji.; 6:56 AM
jem said...: Oooo good one, and more than a bit wistful, its like a glimpse into a possible future.; 4:56 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, jem.; 5:32 PM
Tikkis said...: an answer
arriving to me --
I did not ask; 10:17 AM
Ella Wagemakers said...: Typically your style, Bill. Aren't we all the gods of our own small things?

empty drawer
but mine
nonetheless

Ella; 2:17 PM
Bill said...: tikis and ella, thanks for those very interesting responses.; 5:54 PM

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