colors
autumn colors
an abandoned school bus
rusts in the woods
(Shiki Kukai, April 2008)
posted by Bill | 1:29 PM
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14 Comments:
striking juxtaposition...
What a commentary...
gorgeous ... do you need colors ? and abandoned says much .. i am yet to consider the levels of much ...
>>> Gina
Spurs memories
_m
Thanks for the comments, polona, nick, Vaughn, Gina, magyar. Gina, I'll give colors some thought. The intention is to encourage the reader to see traditional autumn colors, then to complicate the picture. Don't know if that works without the word.
I really like this one! something about it.
Hi Bill!
I just reached here today...
seen many references elsewhere...
so its a quick visit...will come again...
but somehow, these short haikus make me laugh...
see again, surely
wishes!
devika
hope you will make a reciprocatory visit, when you have time...i have a corridor..but these days i'm not sure when I walk there, when i sleep....but would love to greet you there...
nice one bill
john
Thanks, andrew, devika, and John. And, devika, I'll be over to see you soon.
a russet sky --
the sun
is leaving us
Colorful, tikkis.
Oh, thats good. Very visual. Sad too.
Love this! Surprising.
Thanks, jem and lyn. Yes, I felt a note of sadness. I've no idea what it was doing there.
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