haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Friday, February 16, 2007

candlelight dinner

the shadows dancing

around your eyes

Anonymous said...: I love this one. :); 9:47 AM
Bill said...: Thank you, aurora. In a different season, I once wrote a less romantic variation on a similar theme

candlelight dinner
I'm not sure I recognize
that vegetable; 1:30 PM
Masago said...: A subtle romantic image in words. Nice.; 4:17 PM
Anonymous said...: Bill, you are cleverly incorrigible! :); 7:37 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, vaughn and aurora.

Aurora, that's what the nuns used to say about me, but I think they left out "cleverly."; 10:18 AM
Anonymous said...: I like so much this alternation of lights and shadows!
Thank you for sharing, Bill.; 10:25 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, dana-maria.; 8:46 PM
Tikkis said...: First one is very lovely; did She read this vegetable-version of yours? ;-); 1:04 AM
Bill said...: She has a sense of humor, tikkis. And needs one.; 7:59 AM
Pat Paulk said...: Beautiful Bill!!; 8:07 AM
polona said...: mmm... love it!; 10:59 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, Pat and Polona.; 8:27 AM