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Friday, February 16, 2007

candlelight

candlelight dinner
the shadows dancing
around your eyes

13 Comments:

Blogger Aurora said...

I love this one. :)

9:47 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thank you, aurora. In a different season, I once wrote a less romantic variation on a similar theme

candlelight dinner
I'm not sure I recognize
that vegetable

1:30 PM  
Blogger Masago said...

A subtle romantic image in words. Nice.

4:17 PM  
Blogger Aurora said...

Bill, you are cleverly incorrigible! :)

7:37 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, vaughn and aurora.

Aurora, that's what the nuns used to say about me, but I think they left out "cleverly."

10:18 AM  
Blogger Dana-Maria Onica said...

I like so much this alternation of lights and shadows!
Thank you for sharing, Bill.

10:25 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, dana-maria.

8:46 PM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

First one is very lovely; did She read this vegetable-version of yours? ;-)

1:04 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

She has a sense of humor, tikkis. And needs one.

7:59 AM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Beautiful Bill!!

8:07 AM  
Blogger polona said...

mmm... love it!

10:59 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Pat and Polona.

8:27 AM  
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6:55 AM  

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