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Monday, February 26, 2007

birds

birds on a wire
this frigid morning
I'd fly away

6 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

I admire your accurate technique. L2 is a wonderful bridge.
A very beautiful poem!

You would fly away, I would return home...

this meadow
beneath the rainbow...
I would return home

Thank you for sharing,
Dana-Maria

12:50 PM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Me tooooo!!! Gives me ashiver.

4:58 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Pat and Dana-Maria. And, Dana-Maria, thanks for sharing your lovely haiku.

5:04 AM  
Blogger gautami tripathy said...

passion's play
hot sun-
cools it down

8:39 AM  
Blogger polona said...

i can feel the cold.
beautiful!

12:18 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

gautami, thanks for the visit.That's a clever ku.

Dress warm, Polona.

6:04 AM  

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