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Sunday, April 17, 2005

thanks dw

dw bender's comment on the previous post, including her beautiful 2-line haiku (She shows us how it's done.) led to this effort:

tell the butterfly
dandelion's a weed
In a moment of madness, I even thought of doing this one in telegraphic style
dandelion a weed
inform butterfly
but I decided against it.

1 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

"in a moment of madness," ehh? :)

11:13 AM  

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