haiku-usa
A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.
Sunday, April 17, 2005
dw bender's comment on the previous post, including her beautiful 2-line haiku (She shows us how it's done.) led to this effort:
tell the butterfly
dandelion's a weed
In a moment of madness, I even thought of doing this one in telegraphic style
dandelion a weed
inform butterfly
but I decided against it.
1 Comments:
"in a moment of madness," ehh? :)
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