haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

My Photo
Name:
Location: New York, New York

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Sunday, April 10, 2005

Dali and

I spent a long weekend in Philadelphia, where my wife and I visited the Dali show at the Philadelphia Museum. The show was, as expected, extremely crowded, leading to the senryu below and the postscript that follows. As I mentioned in a senryu posted a few days ago, I'm a short man myself.
1
crowded museum
waiting for the tall man
to move along
2
ps
and I waited
and he
in his good time
moved along
we two
strangers
each of us taking
together
the time
that is ours

3 Comments:

Blogger Gone Away said...

Hi Bill,

With the prologue and postscript (minus the references to the posting, senryu postscript), you could have a very nice haibun. Consider it?

MOAWW

7:21 AM  
Blogger Gone Away said...

This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.

7:45 AM  
Blogger indonesianegriku said...

thank's for sharing info,..!
Kerja Keras Adalah Energi Kita
INDONESIA BUMIKU

7:50 AM  

Post a Comment

<< Home

.