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Friday, April 15, 2005

advancing spring

advancing spring
the buds aren't waiting
for me to count them


Blogger Gone Away said...

Enjoyed this one, too. Is it allusory to Shiki's famous "cockscombs" haiku?

Ok, I'm trying again to place a simple comment in the right box...I must be experiencing my "advancing winter" this fine April morning...

senior moments!
must be at least 15
or 16 of them...

(apologies to M. Shiki and Bill for my silliness)

7:58 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Not quite a conscious allusion as I was writing it, but Shiki's haiku was cerainly somewhere in my head.

10:00 AM  
Blogger indonesianegriku said...

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Kerja Keras Adalah Energi Kita

7:49 AM  

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