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Wednesday, July 21, 2010

longest

longest day
the laughter of children
chasing pigeons

Shiki Kukai, June 2010

13 Comments:

Blogger Devika said...

Good one, and Welcome back, Bill :)

wishes,
devika

8:17 AM  
Anonymous gautami tripathy said...

I like the image it creates in my mind!

8:59 AM  
Anonymous gautami tripathy said...

BTW, it is good to see you back!

9:00 AM  
Blogger Marcel Peltier said...

I like this one. friendly.

11:05 AM  
Anonymous Mo said...

Happy children, unhappy pigeons...

Nice summer haiku, Bill !
(And nice to see you back !)

11:35 AM  
Anonymous Monika said...

Sorry, Bill,
once more I pushed the wrong button. The message went out before I could identify myself properly.

amicalement
Monika

11:37 AM  
Anonymous Trend Tattoo said...

nice

12:41 PM  
Blogger Jhon Baker said...

perfectly expressed. great haiku.

2:00 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Devika and Gautami, for the comments and good wishes.

Glad it works for you, Marcel.

Monika, I was wondering who Mo was. Glad you saw the pigeons' point of view, which was an important part of my intention.

1:51 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, TT and Jhon.

1:55 PM  
Blogger Dianne said...

Yep, those children keep me dancing! Have a great weekend.
Dianne

4:00 PM  
Blogger Kristin Riggs said...

Lovely! This is the essence of summer.

10:03 PM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

Looking for Milky Way ...
the full moon found -
and Bill!

This is a variation from one of my three-line-text in my "Northern - texts" - collection:

darkening at midnight
but not a hint
of Milky Way

1:12 AM  

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