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Wednesday, July 21, 2010

longest day

the laughter of children

chasing pigeons

Shiki Kukai, June 2010

Devika Jyothi said...: Good one, and Welcome back, Bill :)

wishes,
devika; 8:17 AM
gautami tripathy said...: I like the image it creates in my mind!; 8:59 AM
gautami tripathy said...: BTW, it is good to see you back!; 9:00 AM
Anonymous said...: I like this one. friendly.; 11:05 AM
Mo said...: Happy children, unhappy pigeons...

Nice summer haiku, Bill !
(And nice to see you back !); 11:35 AM
Monika said...: Sorry, Bill,
once more I pushed the wrong button. The message went out before I could identify myself properly.

amicalement
Monika; 11:37 AM
Trend Tattoo said...: nice; 12:41 PM
Jhon Baker said...: perfectly expressed. great haiku.; 2:00 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, Devika and Gautami, for the comments and good wishes.

Glad it works for you, Marcel.

Monika, I was wondering who Mo was. Glad you saw the pigeons' point of view, which was an important part of my intention.; 1:51 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, TT and Jhon.; 1:55 PM
Dianne said...: Yep, those children keep me dancing! Have a great weekend.
Dianne; 4:00 PM
Kristin Riggs said...: Lovely! This is the essence of summer.; 10:03 PM
Tikkis said...: Looking for Milky Way ...
the full moon found -
and Bill!

This is a variation from one of my three-line-text in my "Northern - texts" - collection:

darkening at midnight
but not a hint
of Milky Way; 1:12 AM

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