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Wednesday, June 23, 2010

autumn memory

of those walks with my father–

so many silences

Second place, Caribbean Kigo Kukai, June 2010

Anonymous said...: it's a very good haïku of memory.; 12:12 AM
John McDonald said...: well done Bill - it got my vote
john; 1:01 AM
Tikkis said...: Caribbean kigo is a very interesting forum!

Here is one belated candidate:

silent walk ...
he doesn't hear
what I'm talking; 4:25 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, Marcel and John.

Good one, Tikkis. I think you want "saying" in place of "talking," unless you want "talking about."; 6:28 AM
Tikkis said...: Yes Bill, let's say it!
Thanks! (Copying it to my blog.); 5:49 AM
David said...: Great haiku!; 5:37 AM