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Wednesday, June 23, 2010

memory

autumn memory
of those walks with my father–
so many silences

Second place, Caribbean Kigo Kukai, June 2010

6 Comments:

Blogger Marcel Peltier said...

it's a very good haïku of memory.

12:12 AM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

well done Bill - it got my vote
john

1:01 AM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

Caribbean kigo is a very interesting forum!

Here is one belated candidate:

silent walk ...
he doesn't hear
what I'm talking

4:25 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Marcel and John.

Good one, Tikkis. I think you want "saying" in place of "talking," unless you want "talking about."

6:28 AM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

Yes Bill, let's say it!
Thanks! (Copying it to my blog.)

5:49 AM  
Blogger David said...

Great haiku!

5:37 AM  

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