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Sunday, June 06, 2010

cool

cool breeze
moonlight
rippling my way

Shiki kukai, May 2010. Assigned topic: "Peace"

18 Comments:

Blogger Dianne said...

rippling, I have seen the wind in your eyes...
wonderful Haiku, I have known this one.
Have a cool week, Bill.
Dianne

8:58 PM  
Blogger Kristin Riggs said...

Absolutely beautiful. The word "rippling" paints this image so perfectly in my mind. I'm so glad to be back from my little break...and reading your poetry is one of the reasons, Bill! :)

Sincerely,
Kristin

10:46 PM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

that's lovely and serene

12:05 AM  
Blogger Marcel Peltier said...

Oui, l'esprit de paix, the spirit of peace.
I like it too.

12:30 AM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

love it Bill
john

12:49 AM  
Blogger Karol Rosiak said...

Very poetic.
Like it very much.

K.

3:10 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

your haiku draws me in; AHA

much love
gillena

1:26 PM  
Blogger gautami tripathy said...

I wish for that rippling wind!

6:32 PM  
Anonymous Monika said...

Bill,
I admire the way you make the word "rippling" evoque the water, whithout naming it. A powerful image - stays with me... !

5:16 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

I love your comment, Dianne.

Kristin, great to hear from you.

Juliet, that means a lot, coming from you.

And peace to you, Marcel.

John, Karol, Gillena, my thanks.

Gautami, I wish it for you.

That's what I was hoping for, Monika.

8:12 AM  
Blogger Nicole Hyde said...

Ah! That was yours...very nice, Bill. I agree with Kristin about "rippling."

8:43 AM  
Blogger Warren said...

Hi Bill - You have painted such a wonderful, peaceful masterpiece with so few words. Only an artist could weave such a lovely poem - thanks for sharing your talent.

Warren

10:03 AM  
Blogger Kristin Riggs said...

Since I don't have your email address, I am commenting on here again to say THANKS! Your comment on my blog about my recent return made my day!!! :) You're the best, Bill.

-Kristin

3:25 PM  
Blogger Magyar said...

Calming thought...
_m

4:22 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

"a poor thing but mine own," Nicole.

And I wish for it for you, Gautami.

You're more than welcome, Kristin. You're a daymaker yourself.

Thanks, Doug. That was the intent.

12:44 PM  
Blogger Adelaide said...

Lovely and peaceful.

Adelaide

7:59 PM  
Blogger Lorraine said...

Imagery is soft, beautiful and oh so refreshing, I love it, Bill!

2:38 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Adelaide and Lorraine, much appreciated.

10:58 AM  

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