Absolutely beautiful. The word "rippling" paints this image so perfectly in my mind. I'm so glad to be back from my little break...and reading your poetry is one of the reasons, Bill! :)
Hi Bill - You have painted such a wonderful, peaceful masterpiece with so few words. Only an artist could weave such a lovely poem - thanks for sharing your talent.
Since I don't have your email address, I am commenting on here again to say THANKS! Your comment on my blog about my recent return made my day!!! :) You're the best, Bill.
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rippling, I have seen the wind in your eyes...
wonderful Haiku, I have known this one.
Have a cool week, Bill.
Dianne
Absolutely beautiful. The word "rippling" paints this image so perfectly in my mind. I'm so glad to be back from my little break...and reading your poetry is one of the reasons, Bill! :)
Sincerely,
Kristin
that's lovely and serene
Oui, l'esprit de paix, the spirit of peace.
I like it too.
love it Bill
john
Very poetic.
Like it very much.
K.
your haiku draws me in; AHA
much love
gillena
I wish for that rippling wind!
Bill,
I admire the way you make the word "rippling" evoque the water, whithout naming it. A powerful image - stays with me... !
I love your comment, Dianne.
Kristin, great to hear from you.
Juliet, that means a lot, coming from you.
And peace to you, Marcel.
John, Karol, Gillena, my thanks.
Gautami, I wish it for you.
That's what I was hoping for, Monika.
Ah! That was yours...very nice, Bill. I agree with Kristin about "rippling."
Hi Bill - You have painted such a wonderful, peaceful masterpiece with so few words. Only an artist could weave such a lovely poem - thanks for sharing your talent.
Warren
Since I don't have your email address, I am commenting on here again to say THANKS! Your comment on my blog about my recent return made my day!!! :) You're the best, Bill.
-Kristin
Calming thought...
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"a poor thing but mine own," Nicole.
And I wish for it for you, Gautami.
You're more than welcome, Kristin. You're a daymaker yourself.
Thanks, Doug. That was the intent.
Lovely and peaceful.
Adelaide
Imagery is soft, beautiful and oh so refreshing, I love it, Bill!
Adelaide and Lorraine, much appreciated.
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