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Saturday, May 29, 2010

rainy Monday

rainy Monday–
but the red carnation
in an old man's buttonhole

Caribbean Kigo Kukai May 2010


Anonymous Monika said...

I love this red carnation in the old man's button hole, illuminating a rainy Monday's blues.

1:01 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...


at my buttonhole
a red triangle


1:44 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Monika and Marcel.

7:38 PM  
Blogger Danièle Duteil said...

I love these contrasts and the humoristic caesure.

10:43 AM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

good one Bill (congrats second in shiki)

6:52 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Daniele and John, my thanks.

John, I'm posting that one here today.

2:08 PM  

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