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Tuesday, May 18, 2010

night

raising her nightgown
above her head . . .
the naked moonlight

15 Comments:

Blogger Danièle Duteil said...

Evocative and erotic.

1:24 AM  
Blogger Marcel Peltier said...

An astonishing show... To see !

2:34 AM  
Blogger Frank said...

I agree with Danièle both evocative and erotic. Nice one Bill...

5:08 AM  
Blogger Nicole Hyde said...

Gorgeous and sensuous!

8:42 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Evocative, erotic, astonishing, gorgeous, sensuous, and . . . nice. Quite a string of adjectives. Thaks, all.

9:06 AM  
Blogger the garden harlot said...

graphic but good !

10:02 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

I'll add "graphic" and "good" to that list of adjectives, harlot. I find that "but" even more interesting, though. Thanks!

10:26 AM  
Blogger the garden harlot said...

i threw in a haiku above the coleus photo in my last post. maybe some more later ! these little things are reminders of how i miss haiku. thank you for nudging me on the action.

10:39 AM  
Blogger the garden harlot said...

ut oh. now i did another haiku for ice plant. i better call it quits. i need to get back to work ! but it was a worthy idea i should have snatched up sooner. thank you again for the suggestion. maybe i will test it out in future posts instead of just blabbing my mouth off about plants.

10:47 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Harlot, I think the odd haiku now and then would fit very well on your garden-oriented blog (which is delightful, by the way).

11:39 AM  
Blogger the garden harlot said...

i kind of went overboard, ha ! i said i'd go back to working and lied. but now it's the truth.

some haiku dabbling would be a nice change of pace to some posts, true.

thank you ! i'll toss some in here and there in the future.

11:44 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

I'll never tell, harlot. By all means, dabble.

12:05 PM  
Blogger Dianne said...

ahh, that enticing cloud-laced moon, my secret affair.....still can make me blush!

9:18 PM  
Anonymous Monika said...

Arriving (once again) somewhat late, I would add this one to the "string of adjectives" : humorous !

6:52 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Dianne, your secret is safe with us.

Your adjective has been added to the official list, Monika.

7:05 AM  

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