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Wednesday, June 16, 2010

small

small town
the waitress asks me
where I'm headed

First published in Modern Haiku

9 Comments:

Blogger Adelaide said...

yes, Bill. That is a small town where strangers are immediately recognized. Having moved to a small town 4 years ago, I think I can recognize the day trippers now.

Adelaide

3:47 PM  
Blogger Marcel Peltier said...

She is very curious, Bill.
A good senryû.
Have a good day.

12:10 AM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

nice one Bill
john

1:02 AM  
Blogger Ralf Bröker said...

Be carefull. Movies proof these woman as the advance guard of an evil power. Just turn around, leave that place and look for a sunny place. Anyway: great senyru.

Best wishes
Ralf

4:46 PM  
Anonymous Monika said...

Like it, Bill ! Dangerous or not, these waitress is lingering in my mind :-)

6:14 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

What got me was, not only that she knew I wasn't from around there, but that she assumed I was just passing through, as though this couldn't be anybody's destination. I didn't think she was dangerous, but, in future, I'll heed your warnings. Just tell me which movies I have to see.Thanks, all.

5:31 PM  
Blogger Dianne said...

a small package packed with a huge punch. I love it.
you are one funny funny guy.
thanks for visiting!

6:13 PM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

...got an idea but perhaps it's better not to say it ? ...


(Once upon a time I visited the only one Pub in a Brasilian coastal town... I still do remember that visit!)

2:34 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Dianne.

Tikkis, I'll never tell.

6:12 PM  

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