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Wednesday, June 16, 2010

small town

the waitress asks me

where I'm headed

First published in Modern Haiku

Adelaide said...: yes, Bill. That is a small town where strangers are immediately recognized. Having moved to a small town 4 years ago, I think I can recognize the day trippers now.

Adelaide; 3:47 PM
Anonymous said...: She is very curious, Bill.
A good senryû.
Have a good day.; 12:10 AM
John McDonald said...: nice one Bill
john; 1:02 AM
Ralf Bröker said...: Be carefull. Movies proof these woman as the advance guard of an evil power. Just turn around, leave that place and look for a sunny place. Anyway: great senyru.

Best wishes
Ralf; 4:46 PM
Monika said...: Like it, Bill ! Dangerous or not, these waitress is lingering in my mind :-); 6:14 AM
Bill said...: What got me was, not only that she knew I wasn't from around there, but that she assumed I was just passing through, as though this couldn't be anybody's destination. I didn't think she was dangerous, but, in future, I'll heed your warnings. Just tell me which movies I have to see.Thanks, all.; 5:31 PM
Dianne said...: a small package packed with a huge punch. I love it.
you are one funny funny guy.
thanks for visiting!; 6:13 PM
Tikkis said...: ...got an idea but perhaps it's better not to say it ? ...

(Once upon a time I visited the only one Pub in a Brasilian coastal town... I still do remember that visit!); 2:34 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, Dianne.

Tikkis, I'll never tell.; 6:12 PM

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