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Wednesday, July 01, 2009

light

first light . . .
after the car alarm
birdsong

[First published at Temps Libre]

8 Comments:

Blogger Masago said...

Something about this resonates for me. Well done.

6:15 PM  
Blogger Devika said...

like it Bill

here most of the time car alarms come after the birdsong! :)

they are up even before the light,

wishes,
devika

7:50 PM  
Blogger Karol said...

... Good haiku, a nicely observed moment.
Thank you, Bill.

- Karol

8:08 AM  
Blogger haiku-shelf said...

I like this haiku very much, Bill!

12:38 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Vaughn, Devika,Karol, and Angelika.

6:57 PM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

The car's song --
the bird
replies


The starlings learn all kind of sounds; in our garden was one singing the sound of a cellular phone. I took my phone and replied: "Hellou!"

The bird didn't reply.

11:59 AM  
Blogger jem said...

Oh yes, that's just how it is. One seems to wake the other. Sometimes it's an endless chain of night / early morning noises. The foxes barks wake the gulls who answer back. And in the middle of it all, us trying to sleep.

4:40 AM  
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5:48 AM  

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