haiku-usa: clearing

Saturday, June 13, 2009

sky clearing

the trail of a sparrow

through a puddle

[First published in Moonset]

Devika Jyothi said...: WOW! ability to see both above and below...that comes with experience, i think,

i am only learning that art...and i gain an inspiration, Bill :)

wishes,
devika; 8:42 PM
Frank... said...: A nicely observed moment...; 1:58 AM
Magyar said...: Projected shadows are sometimes the -more clear view- of things as they are. Good one, Bill. _m; 3:26 PM
Masago said...: Intriging.; 8:07 PM
John McDonald said...: love it Bill
john; 12:53 AM
jem said...: Beautiful. I always fall for reflection poetry!; 3:30 AM
Crafty Green Poet said...: beautifully caught!; 5:13 AM
vina said...: oh, i was also supposed to post one with sparrows!

rolling hills
sparrows glide freely over
crawling vehicles

ok, i'm ready for your pointers, Bill (and others, maybe)! heehee.; 5:17 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, my friends.; 5:26 PM
Gillena Cox said...: keen observation Bill

much love
gillena; 6:22 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, Gillena.; 2:25 PM
Tikkis said...: Also here those "sparrows" (small but happy children) are doing the same!

Splash!
Mom's angry shouting:
- You naughty sparrow!; 2:19 AM
Bill said...: And remember my birthday poem?

76 today
I walk through a puddle
because I can; 8:50 PM

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