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Sunday, May 31, 2009

look

the doctor wants
to take a closer look
my unexamined life

[First published in Notes From the Gean]

15 Comments:

Blogger Masago said...

oh, the suspense...

4:00 PM  
Blogger Dalloway said...

ha! too brilliant, Bill

5:22 PM  
Blogger Devika said...

That's something to look at, for sure! :)

Good one, Bill

wishes,
devika

10:35 PM  
Blogger Frank Williams said...

A nicely contructed haiku. The third line is a knockout...

1:59 AM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

good one Bill - hope all is well
john

2:49 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

It turned out to be a pre-cancerous skin thingy, nothing to be concerned about. When she said, let's take a closer look, I tried to be philosophical, but Socrates got in the way.

Thanks, Vaughn, Dalloway, Devika, Frank, and John.

6:22 AM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

lunch break --
my doctor eating
one more apple

5:26 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

tikkis, I thought they were supposed to keep the doctor away.

4:27 PM  
Blogger Milan said...

perfect one... i liked this..

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12:04 AM  
Anonymous Gina said...

sublime as always ...

i found a few of your pieces around ... more recently in herons nest?

its always an aha moment and one of nodding and lingering ... your poetry is wonderful >>> Gina

2:10 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

nice one Bill and a nice follow up from Tikkis

much love
gillena

11:44 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Milan.

Yep, Gina, I have two in the current "Heron's Nest," six in the current "Ambrosia," four in "Notes from the Gean." These are all available online, and the poems will eventually find their way to this blog.

Thanks, Gillena. I always enjoy tikkis's follow-ups.

1:25 PM  
Blogger Magyar said...

Bill... born in 1943, I suddenly feel much younger. :-)

oncologist
still quite clear
these thirty years

_m

5:08 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

I just found this comment, Doug. Glad to hear it.

1:11 PM  
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