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Sunday, May 31, 2009

look

the doctor wants

to take a closer look

my unexamined life

[First published in Notes From the Gean]

14 Comments:

Masago said...: oh, the suspense...; 4:00 PM
Emma Dalloway said...: ha! too brilliant, Bill; 5:22 PM
Devika Jyothi said...: That's something to look at, for sure! :)

Good one, Bill

wishes,
devika; 10:35 PM
Frank... said...: A nicely contructed haiku. The third line is a knockout...; 1:59 AM
John McDonald said...: good one Bill - hope all is well
john; 2:49 AM
Bill said...: It turned out to be a pre-cancerous skin thingy, nothing to be concerned about. When she said, let's take a closer look, I tried to be philosophical, but Socrates got in the way.

Thanks, Vaughn, Dalloway, Devika, Frank, and John.; 6:22 AM
Tikkis said...: lunch break --
my doctor eating
one more apple; 5:26 AM
Bill said...: tikkis, I thought they were supposed to keep the doctor away.; 4:27 PM
Anonymous said...: perfect one... i liked this..

www.greaterusa.blogspot.com; 12:04 AM
Gina said...: sublime as always ...

i found a few of your pieces around ... more recently in herons nest?

its always an aha moment and one of nodding and lingering ... your poetry is wonderful >>> Gina; 2:10 AM
Gillena Cox said...: nice one Bill and a nice follow up from Tikkis

much love
gillena; 11:44 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, Milan.

Yep, Gina, I have two in the current "Heron's Nest," six in the current "Ambrosia," four in "Notes from the Gean." These are all available online, and the poems will eventually find their way to this blog.

Thanks, Gillena. I always enjoy tikkis's follow-ups.; 1:25 PM
Magyar said...: Bill... born in 1943, I suddenly feel much younger. :-)

oncologist
still quite clear
these thirty years

_m; 5:08 PM
Bill said...: I just found this comment, Doug. Glad to hear it.; 1:11 PM

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