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Thursday, May 21, 2009
As many of you know, I was away on Mother's Day. I was pleased to learn, upon returning, that this had taken third place in the Caribbean Kukai (Kigo: Mother's Day)
mother's day
I step over
a crack
And I wrote this one on the day itself in California
mother's day
she takes her kids
to the movies
A belated Happy Mother's Day to all.
8 Comments:
welcome back, hope you enjoyed your spring sojourn
much love
gillena
the first one is superb, Bill..like the second as well :)
Mother's Day wishes to you too,
devika
Congrats Bill. I love both.
Thanks, Gillena, Devika, and gautami.
Congratulations Bill on taking third place in the Caribbean Kukai (Kigo: Mother's Day)Both are very nice haiku...
Thank you, Frank.
Kids! Please,
what's all that racket about?
Earthquake.
;-) or :-(
Both good Bill. The first one feels more serious. The second one more fun. I'm sure she didn't but I wish the mother had taken the kids to see a film of her choice not theirs.
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