I'm not sure what you intended, but I got a man checking his watch by the time of the tide, or perhaps checking that the tide was on time by his watch. Either way I like it!
Since this only works insofar as it sets wheels turning in the mind of the reader, jem, I'll just say it has something (maybe everything) to do with time and tide.
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nice one, Bill
captured the essence of the days that past....hope time soon takes the tide high :)
wishes,
devika
_It's necessary to check the time; gotta be sure the tide has clung to the 'posted' schedule_!
_Lovit Bill!
_m
funny, the connections we make.
love this
Apparently, this one is connecting. Thanks, Devika, Magyar, and polona.
I like it. Short and to the point.
Wonder if everyone sees what I do?
T
yes nice one
john
I like it!
Happy Easter!
Angelika
Thanks, Tara, John, and Angelika, and a happy Easter to you.
i think it makes or an understandable stand alone; considering the jutaposition of time - nature the leader and the man the follower
Thanks, Gillena. People seem to be seeing what I saw in the moment.
nice
slack water --
I check my
dry shoes
(this is one memory happened to me!)
Thanks, Andrew.
Good catch, tikkis.
I like it...the moon/wave time juxtaposed with watch time...
Thank you, Jay. That's about what I had in mind.
perfect!
Thanks very much, Gene.
I'm not sure what you intended, but I got a man checking his watch by the time of the tide, or perhaps checking that the tide was on time by his watch. Either way I like it!
Since this only works insofar as it sets wheels turning in the mind of the reader, jem, I'll just say it has something (maybe everything) to do with time and tide.
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