haiku-usa: March 6, 2009

Friday, March 06, 2009

Here's one I just posted at Andrew's blog, in response to one of his. In posting it here, I've added the word "first" to line 1.

first signs of spring . . .

the hours I've spent inside

myself

John McDonald said...: nice reflective Bill
john; 1:09 AM
Gillena Cox said...: This comment has been removed by the author.; 5:46 AM
Gillena Cox said...: i like the intimated 'budding' metaphor

much love
gillena; 5:49 AM
jem said...: Mmmm nice. It does feelin like that at the end of a long winter. Like I'm unfurling a little, stretching and growing under the sun.; 4:41 AM
Magyar said...: Among us, though subliminal perhaps, a universal feeling. Good one Bill. _m; 8:10 AM
polona said...: perfect. like many others, i suppose, i know the feeling...; 9:07 AM
Bill said...: Ah, jem, Magyar, Polona, thank you for assuring me that others will know what I'm feeling--very important to me with this poem.; 9:18 AM
haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert) said...: a good haiku

I repeat what John wrote: "nice reflective..."; 11:02 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, Angelika; 5:27 AM
Devika Jyothi said...: A very emotional one, to me Bill :)

I read this at Andrew's..but I missed to reach here earlier...

wishes,
devika; 7:54 PM
Bill said...: Thanks for the visit, Devika.; 6:20 AM

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